Tuesday, April 30, 2013

ESSAY ROMEO AND JULIET

The Book Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare is about 2 families that hate each other, (Montages and Capulets) one day a girl named Juliet Capulet and a boy named Romeo Montague met and instantly fell in love. They where in love so much that they ended up killing themselves so that they could be together forever. The way Romeo and Juliet acted towards each other is actually very similar to modern day lovers. Today many people show a large amount of affection towards each other much like Romeo and Juliet did.

One example of lovers in modern day time compared to Romeo and Juliet is Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Melarik from the Hunger Games. In Romeo and Juliet, Romeo and Juliet are described as star crossed lovers, and in the Hunger Games Katniss and Peeta are called the “Star crossed lovers from District 12” Also in the first Hunger Games Katniss and Peeta are willing to kill each other to prove that they love each other so much that if one of them couldn’t come out to the games then both of them wouldn’t, in the end they both lived but it is extremely similar to Romeo and Juliet.

The newer version of Romeo and Juliet that takes place in “Verona Beach” (LA) The characters are presented as modern day people that carry around guns and drive cars, but talk like Romeo and Juliet (the book) and they have modern day conflicts and problems. One thing that the movie does really well in is showing how much Romeo and Juliet love each other, and show it in a more modern version. Like the balcony scene, there is a security guard that is watching cameras to make sure no trespassers come in, this movie version of the book makes Romeo and Juliet seen like kids that live in the 21 century and not hundreds of years ago.

In modern day Romeo and Juliet could be seen as a odd couple, there are some different things about the way they acted back then and today, for example Juliet would most likely not be forced to marry someone, and she would have a choice. This would make it so Romeo and Juliet would never have to kill themselves, and there would most likely be no family feud that prohibits 2 people to marry each other from the other family. So if Romeo and Juliet meet in a modern 21 century setting the would most likely be able to marry each other and be happy together, and not kill themselves for their love. But in all the book and movies are similar and the way Romeo and Juliet act is not much different to modern day books like the Hunger Games and modern day couples.

All in all todays Romeos and Juliet's are not much different than the ones read about in the book Romeo and Juliet. In fact many authors from the 21 century use a similar set up of two lovers (star crossed lovers) such as the the Hunger Games.

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  3. Evan's essay was amazing. The words are very sophisticated, and well used. And the connection he has to other lovers, can express more on Romeo and Juliet's love.

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  4. I like that you used another fiction story to show the similarities and differences between both.

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  5. You connected all of your paragraphs to your thesis very well, but you need to watch out for grammar errors. o___o

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  6. you connected your details your thesis very well goood job

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    1. The lack of grammatical correctness in this sentence makes me sick.

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  7. this is a nice essay. its very well written

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  8. Also the comparisons were very accurate and I can see what you mean about how is is an weird relationship.

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  9. this was very organized and very well explained,

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  10. i think that the essay shows effort and time spent but there were many mistakes made in grammar and other things, i think that it will be very easy to revise

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  11. I liked it. I thought it was well organized and had a well balanced thesis statement. Nice job!

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  12. good job, Evan, you did a real good job leading in to the whole story with the beginning and comparing and contrasting the older version to the newer version.

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  13. I like how you took other stories and versions of romeo and juliet to contrast

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  14. your essay was very detailed. you did a good job at using other love stories that were similar and connecting them all.

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  15. I like that you used another fiction story to show the similarities and differences between both.

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  16. I like how you gave examples about how the hunger games is like Romeo and Juliet.And i liked that you didnt summarize Romeo and Juliet and how at the end, you concluded it by restating your thesis and your overall theme. you shouldnt have said "one day a girl named Juliet Capulet and a boy named Romeo Montague" because it sounds like a fairytale beginning and you should say why they are so important, they are not just montague and capulet commons, romeo is montagues only son and juliet is capulets only daughter so it is very forbidden

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  17. very good job of connecting the hunger games to r & j. the ntro needs some editing but overall it was very good.

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  18. I like how you connected Romeo and Juliet to Katniss and Peeta. It was very well written. Nice Job DUDE.

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  19. I liked it a lot and really enjoy the comparison to the Hunger Games. Nice Job Chap.

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  20. I liked how in your essay you ended it with how Romeo and Juliet is kinda like Hunger Games.
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  21. 1-2 Strengths
    1. Really strong thesis
    2. Ypu had a lot of supportibg details
    1-2 questions
    1. Why did you connect it to the hunger games?
    2.Is it based on modern day or is it based on things that are simialar
    1-2 revisions
    1. Romeo and juliet is a play not a book

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  22. I really liked how you compared Romeo and Juliet to the Hunger Games, and gave specific details from each text. I thought your essay was well organized and your thesis was very clear. Nice job man :)

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  23. I like how connected it to a modernday couple and book. They do have similarities to one another.

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  24. This essay was really well written. I like how you included a reasonable amount of textual evidence.

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